Storyboard & Script: Feedback

We showed our storyboard mock-up of the film, and our script to several people for evaluation and feedback. The best, most in-depth potentially helpful feedback was given from Mr Jackson.

He suggested, that we switch around our sound bridge in our script, so that the film starts with genuine singing, before moving into a sound bridge. This makes viewer more in-depth with the character, but also makes more sense, as opposed to moving in and out of a sound bridge.